Sunday, February 13, 2011

I am Daniel~~

        Holle, I am Daniel, last time, April stopped at sand storm, and now let me tell you what going on next. The people and I went to somewhere to kept away from the storm, and what's going on at that time? Please read it~
        The sand storm was really wear, so I thought it was not from nature. And I met a beautiful girl named Sha’uri, and I fell in love with Sha’uri, we found a stone wall. And on the wall, we found some local history. Inscribed: in a distant planet, there was a person called Ra, and he flee his homes brink of extinction, to the Milky Way for living so long and finally, he found a boy on the earth, with a boy's curiosity, Ra attached to his body, with the human form, Ra claims to the sun god, he used the Stargate to sent the people who from the Earth to this planet to be slaves. And then, Earth was riots, the Stargate was buried. Ra was afraid there would be riots, so he stopped people to read and write, to stopped people know the truth. 
        Ra knew that we arrived and we wanted to use the bomb to destroy the Stargate to protect Earth. Awakening people and my friends who are from the Earth struggled with the sun god. Ra who is the sun god knew it was hopeless, so he wanted to run away, but I picked up the bomb and put it in the circle of light, the bomb was showed up inside the star-ship again. When the bomb exploded, destroying the sun god of the pyramid star-ship. Stargate people regain their freedom, my friends through the Stargate and came back to the earth, I gave O’Neil the udjat eye to let him bring it back to Catherine, Because I would stay there with my love—Sha’uri.

1 comment:

  1. Great first-person perspective. This is really a fantastic story that stretches the imagination. So is this RA character evil or good?

    -G

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